Comments on: Short Story http://cabalamuse.wordpress.com A Moroccan about the world Fri, 18 Dec 2009 15:20:46 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Lili http://cabalamuse.wordpress.com/my-latest-short-story/#comment-537 Lili Fri, 23 Oct 2009 05:17:44 +0000 http://cabalamuse.wordpress.com/?page_id=392#comment-537 Sorry about reading your stories backward. I am interrested in knowing why transportation plays such a central part in your stories. Is it intentional? BTW, I agree this leaves us wanting more. Sorry about reading your stories backward. I am interrested in knowing why transportation plays such a central part in your stories. Is it intentional?
BTW, I agree this leaves us wanting more.

]]> By: Janice http://cabalamuse.wordpress.com/my-latest-short-story/#comment-280 Janice Sat, 14 Mar 2009 19:48:49 +0000 http://cabalamuse.wordpress.com/?page_id=392#comment-280 some favorite phrases: "Like Baghdad, the candles cried while burning." "The streets were deserted and the wind swept through them whistling like an invisible flute player. " some favorite phrases: “Like Baghdad, the candles cried while burning.”

“The streets were deserted and the wind swept through them whistling like an invisible flute player. “

]]> By: Janice http://cabalamuse.wordpress.com/my-latest-short-story/#comment-279 Janice Sat, 14 Mar 2009 19:42:59 +0000 http://cabalamuse.wordpress.com/?page_id=392#comment-279 oh my. yes, more of this please. Your story is compelling, told with passion, and beautifully written. Hope you do finish this, I am at the edge of my seat! I admire the life you've had and the things you've experienced and hope to get to know your blog now that I've discovered it. I am in the process of discovering just how little I know about the world, and feeling the forces of gravity (or destiny?) as they pull on me from across the ocean. oh my. yes, more of this please.

Your story is compelling, told with passion, and beautifully written. Hope you do finish this, I am at the edge of my seat!

I admire the life you’ve had and the things you’ve experienced and hope to get to know your blog now that I’ve discovered it. I am in the process of discovering just how little I know about the world, and feeling the forces of gravity (or destiny?) as they pull on me from across the ocean.

]]> By: Mark http://cabalamuse.wordpress.com/my-latest-short-story/#comment-270 Mark Tue, 03 Mar 2009 09:50:51 +0000 http://cabalamuse.wordpress.com/?page_id=392#comment-270 I agree let's finish this! I agree let’s finish this!

]]> By: Inspiration http://cabalamuse.wordpress.com/my-latest-short-story/#comment-247 Inspiration Mon, 26 Jan 2009 14:45:19 +0000 http://cabalamuse.wordpress.com/?page_id=392#comment-247 Great writing; we want to read the rest... Great writing; we want to read the rest…

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